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This was very emotional for me to write.

I'm just keeping going with this for as long as there's a story to be told.

Part three to Time Bomb. Feedback would be great.

Not powerful, not about romance or death but it mattered to me so I wrote about it.

As promised, follow up for Time Bomb. I didn't feel comfortable putting in his second name, so I just left blanks.

This is just a beginning of something. I just want to see if it catches anyone's interest, so I can decide whether to continue it.