Shadow_doll : Writing

Devils Contract

Devils Contract

A Poem by Shadow_doll


Kinda dark. Im aware it needs alot of work, but im stumped as to what exactly it needs. Please help by giveing any ideas or oppinions you have.
Torment

Torment

A Poem by Shadow_doll


The Vampiress

The Vampiress

A Poem by Shadow_doll


First part is writen by myself. Second part is written by a dear freind of mine :) Feel free to constructively critisize it to the death.
Insanity

Insanity

A Poem by Shadow_doll


Please bash and give ANY ideas or thoughts you have.