Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus : Writing

Prologue~Page 6

Prologue~Page 6

A Chapter by Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus


Please critique my work
Prologue~Page 7

Prologue~Page 7

A Chapter by Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus


Please critique my work!
Prologue~Page 8

Prologue~Page 8

A Chapter by Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus


Critique my work please :)
Prologue~Page 9

Prologue~Page 9

A Chapter by Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus


Please critique my work :)
Prologue~Page 10

Prologue~Page 10

A Chapter by Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus


Critique my work please!!
Prologue~Page 11

Prologue~Page 11

A Chapter by Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus


Really need help on this one!