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A second rewrite after a critique for Tim Green at Rattle

theme of reaching the end

The tale of a father I once had from a son's perspective. A new revision with editing suggested by Ken e Bujold and Tim Green. Retitled.

It is short

Spring

For those who can remember what an Orange Julius was--it was big for a time.

Why do we put it out or reach? We should be protecting from the protectors.

Message in a time capsule bottle

Self inflicted dream.

Basically iambic tetrameter--just so I won't forget how.