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Constructive Criticism about Flow15 Years AgoI would really like some constructive criticism on some of my poem. I am really having trouble with their flow, anyways if anyone could stop by and take a couple minutes to read and comment on "Catch My Breath", 'Dangled Time" and "Kaleidoscope" I would really appreciate it.
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