100 % Review Forum a little help folks?

heyy .. so ive written this story, love-the question or the answer? and i'm a little confused wether i should develop it into a short story or maybe even a novelette .. i do have a premise, in my mind, for expanding it, but i just want to know some intial reactions.. like do you think the characters are interesting enough to carry the story forward? i would appreciate honest reviwes .. and i will definitely in turn review your works .. cheers :)