100 % Review Forum Review my prologue?

I'm working on the first book of a series I hope to publish one day.  I don't want to reveal much right now, but I will say that the prologue opens the book/series with the death of the main characters (Lilith's) parents.  It's a very physically emotional experience for her written in her point of view.  At the end of the series there will also be a series epilogue.  These two parts of the series are the only sections that will be written in a first person point of view.  The rest of the series is from third person.  Once someone has reviewed it, I'll return the favor by reviewing a piece of work from their page.