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I would really like some reviews on my new poem Time, and on my new story. Feel free to check out my poems and i'll check out yours too. Friend me!(:

Hi my name is Joe. Ill read what you wrote and if you want you will read what I have written. I'm very new at this, as far as posting poems on the internet. So mabey we can get things rolling?

I just saw how old you are. Ive been writing since about 14 or 15 also. My poem (only got one posted so far) has a cuss word and might be considered "Mature". Just a heads up.