100 % Review Forum Need reviews please

If anybody would be kind enough to read the first chapter of my novella ''The Invaders'' I will review something of yours. I worked strenuously on it for nine months and have polished it to the best of my ability. I thank the few who have already reviewed it; however a few sets of fresh eyes would be nice. Thanks!
P.S. keep in mind if you're not a fan of horror with sickening details or foul language, there's a lot in this book. So if you're not into that type of thing, I'm not offended if it's not for you. Other than that, enjoy!