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A moment of your time to look at some of my work.

12 Years Ago


I'd like some of my work reviewed as I'm in the process of writing a screenplay and wish to know whether my work is up to scratch enough to be able to pull it off. I've been given positive, yet constructive reviews so far by friends and users of this site so far, but you can never have too much of someone's opinion on your work.
I'll leave links to each submission here with a sentence explaining what it's about without giving too much away.
You can just pick one or more of whatever sounds the most appealing to you.
Thank you.

The Mountain: A poem depicting Human Divinity and redemption.

Mother Machine: A non-rhyming poem about our dependency on technology. First poem I've ever written.

Oh, Woe is you!: A somewhat motivational rant that I had after I saw how many people were whining about their lives.

Joyous Skin: A strange monologue(?) I wrote during a misanthropic relapse.

Rain: A case of everyday infatuation.

Mercy of the Malicious: Lyrics for a Black Metal song concerning Extreme Atheism, Antitheism and pride in decadence.

An Outstretched Hand: Me helping someone who needed it.
The Hole (Story behind An Outstretched Hand): Transcript of the chat log that inspired An Outstretched Hand.

Insomnia: Describing my sleep disorder and how it affects me, the thought processes behind it, etc.

The Painful Truth: My personal musings on the philosophy of Death.

Mummy's Not Here: The thought processes of a child being abused. My first piece of writing.

Thanks again.