100 % Review Forum New guy looking for reviews.

Hi there,
My name is Lucas and I've been working on a Young Adult Fantasy Novel for quite some time and I believe I am ready for people to have a read and let me know what they think.
Grammar is not my strong point, so any tips there would be amazing.
Also for anyone that reviews my work I'll be more than happy to read and review a piece of yours.
I've put the first chapter up on my page so feel free to take a look and can't wait to hear what people think of it :)
~Lucas