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New chapter! Would love some thoughts!11 Years AgoPosted the first official chapter. Edited to what I think is pretty satisfactory. But I am my own worse critic so perhaps after a few reviews I will edit it again. Let me know what you think! It's not a prologue so no problems. :)
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