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I've always been creative but I never had enough confidence or interest in writing. I now know I want to go to school for creative writing. One day I decided to write my response to Greed, Lust and Ego in the most creative fashion I could to express my skill but to also express a dire need for change within the human mind.
July 8th 2014 Spoken Word found me. I would be honored if anyone read this, help me find places that would appreciate this, anything.
Gideon's Guide: First Chapter in my Writing.