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Re: Post in this thread and I'll review whatever you want10 Years AgoI'd love if you reviewed either of my pieces! Thanks!
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Re: Post in this thread and I'll review whatever you want10 Years AgoCould use some constructive criticism for the start of my book The Gallows, especially dialogue. Every bit helps.
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Re: Post in this thread and I'll review whatever you want10 Years AgoPlease if you have time take a look at any of my writings. Thank you!
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Re: Post in this thread and I'll review whatever you want10 Years AgoCan I ask for a review of my poetry? I have only written 3 poems till now. I want to know if I actually have a grasp of the subject. Thank you
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Re: Post in this thread and I'll review whatever you want10 Years AgoI would love for you to review my short story "The view from the window"
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Re: Post in this thread and I'll review whatever you want10 Years AgoHeyy.. Im new to this website and I think it would be a great help if you could review my work therefore I can improve!
many thanks, Parn |
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Re: Post in this thread and I'll review whatever you want10 Years AgoHeyy.. Im new to this website and I think it would be a great help if you could review my work therefore I can improve!
many thanks, Parn |
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Re: Post in this thread and I'll review whatever you want10 Years AgoCould you possibly review the first (and up till now only) chapter of my new book Magnificent Model? It's part of a series called International, and I really would like some good advice to help me along the way. Take your time, if you're too busy do it some time that suits you. :D
Thank you so much! xxx Cass |
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Re: Post in this thread and I'll review whatever you want10 Years AgoHey I have written a short story, "Rain or Shine". It would be great if you can take a look at it and see what you think about the motif of the umbrella and the two characters. Thanks! =]
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Re: Post in this thread and I'll review whatever you want10 Years Agokindly review my recent poem here 's the link. criticism is always welcome!
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Re: Post in this thread and I'll review whatever you want10 Years AgoHello. Would you review my short story "The creatures you'll fear"?
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Re: Post in this thread and I'll review whatever you want SHORTSTORY10 Years Ago Late Night Drive
It’s 3AM. Mary drives downtown with no aim, lulled by the city lights as the car’s headlights lead the empty streets. Ironically some sense of comfort warms her.It is at night she feels the most alive. Walking in a place filled with people in the daylight stressed her, all the noise and action only made her loneliness grow as her unconsciousness begged for retreat. Radiohead booms in the radio. With a hand in the steering wheel, the other falls off the window as the fresh breeze tickles the tips of her fingers. No stars shine in the sky, in fact, she senses small raindrops greeting her hand. The drizzle turns into a storm, she maintains apathetic, only listening more carefully this time. Her mind is somewhere else. Everywhere but here. She stands between the rational and irrational one hand in the unknown the other on the wheel. Time slips away as the night breeze brushed her fingers. The city lights start vanishing as she goes in bumpy snake-like streets leaded by an urgent force. She closes the window and both hand hold the steering wheel. She realizes she lead herself to a distant suburb. Broke down houses pass by with leaking pipes faded colors and crooked broken gates . She keeps driving for quite a while only to realize she’s been passing by the exact houses again and again. Kafka Street a sign shows. She decides to stop the car and take a look at the fold up map Kevin, her boyfriend, left for her in the glove compartment.After searching thoroughly for the street with her finger she laughs at her self remembering the labyrinthine works of Franz Kafka. I’m screwed. A shadow taps the glass window. |
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Re: Post in this thread and I'll review whatever you want10 Years AgoHi I just started putting my work in publics audience, can you please review mine, and please give some advice on it, thnx and nice meeting you
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