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Rewriting a story I wrote in 20161 Year AgoLooking to get some folks to help me compare my old v new writing. This story has been one of my favorites that I'd written when I was younger. Finally putting some work into rewriting it. Currently it's 12 30 am and I just finished ch1 of the rewrite some several minutes ago.
Old version New version Probably wouldn't be too well a comparison, since, as I said, it's past 12am. I'll probably look into editing the chapter to make it better/longer when I'm not working on half a brain. But let me know (: |
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