Fiction Authors Forum Brand New!!!

I rarely share my work, but decided that if I wanted to get better at it I needed to.  So I found Writer's Cafe and posted up some stuff since then.  It'd be nice to see what you guys thought of what I wrote so far.  I'm a little ADD with my work and have trouble finishing it, but my short story "Burn" is complete so if you want to read something that's finished check that out.  The other books that I've posted need some work and I really want some advice if you're willing to lend.  I'll more than happily read what you guys have as well.