Fiction Authors Forum Does your story need a review?

If anyone wants a review of a STORY send me a message, I'm not as strong in the poem department.

I tend to take a critical look at things like an editor would, so it won't be the kind of review that just gushes over how good or bad it is, although if it's really good I'll be sure to mention it :)

I woud like to hear your say on mine-there are two-The Rebellion and Broken

Thanks. When you can check out my story “Tony and Sarah.” I don't consider it my best work by any means, but it would be nice to get some feedback.