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   The night was so cold, it was hardly funny. I stood there, drenched in the rain, shivering like a vibrating phone, and waving my hand off the side of the road. No cars would pick me up. God I couldn't believe they had just left me here. They said those stupid words, "Our way or the highway," and I jumped out. But first they were talking about some bug that they needed to get out of me. Geez, what a joke. Though it was kind of wierd that they knew my dream.

Aha! Got your name now, Connor. Ha! Ha ha! (Diabolical laughter)

That did remind me of the Matrix, but in a slightly more amusing way. I liked the beginning--it kinda borders on 'It was a dark and stormy night' beginning but adds a good twist. Nice.

Well, most people on here know my writing style, it's mostly jovial. I do have just a few somewhat serious writing pieces but mostly I'm just a joker. What can I say?

You can say, "Good job, Connor, you're catching onto the funny stuff!"