Lonely Writers Blog Group Forum Help!

Alright folks, I need some help. Since reading LOTR several years back I've had this huge epic story brewing in my head. Along with Tolkien, I'd like to thank Rice and Lovecraft for finally giving me the final details of my story. It's kind of dark fantasy which is a new realm of writing for me. Anyways, I've written what I think could be a prologue for my story, I've written it a number of times and never truely felt it. Well my most recent writing of the prologue I'm a bit happier with. Atleast in the way that I went about it. I'd love for you all to read this piece, it's extremely short, and give me all the feedback you can. Remember, I'm looking for ALL suggestions you can give so please don't hesitate thinking you'll hurt my feelings!