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A question

18 Years Ago


Need reactions for my newest story Webcam Murders
Background:
You are over there (In a different country)
The love of your life that you are talking too on the computer is over here. (U.S.A.)
You both have your webcams.
You see an intruder come into her home and shoot her.
Question: What do you do?


 

[no subject]

18 Years Ago


Ohhh, creepy. I like the idea, but I'd make one small change...have it a little more of a graphic death than just a shooting. As for what I would do, in horror movie world I'd probably attempt to solve the mystery myself and such, IRL I'd call the police (hey, I'm not stupid!!!). lol

[no subject]

18 Years Ago


Awesome idea!!! I want to read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[no subject]

18 Years Ago


I hit "Save," and then back up the save to preserve the evidence.

Then I Google the cops' number in wherever she used to live and alert them.

I'm aware (somehow) that the killer is computer savvy and knows who I am and is coming to get me too.

You fill in the blanks.

S & O

 

 

 

[no subject]

18 Years Ago


great idea Love it. I like Surly's addition to it as well. i cant think of anything else to add to it. maybe have the killer get on the chat, and start messing with the boyfriend's mind a little. Maybe he can have an accomplice over at the boyfriend's country waiting for the signal. They could have been stalking the couple for some time, hacking into their computers.


did i say before i didnt have any ideas to add? i guess i lied. LOL

[no subject]

18 Years Ago


Thanks for answering my question I'll add it to the story .

[no subject]

18 Years Ago


Well, that's a great story idea! I think I agree with everyone else on here. I would make it a bit more grisly than just a shooting...and create some serious fear in t he other party who watched. But then, I love suspense!