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Sinceer	[no subject] 17 Years Ago Thanks for the heads up on the Contest.. i will be postin my verse/s soon enough... heres' a horrorcore verse i did on another site... it doesnt really embody the whole hip hop culture...but...at least it rhymes right...lol Yes, sodomies grim, I’ll use filaments to suture ya bodily sin.. take stroke paddles to ya dark nature…ya no longer faultily dim.. cut ya balls off, na, have em sawed off, then thrown in da lottery bin… da debaucheries singed, put the metal to ya face, even the gaudily cringe.. u cant possibly win, I’m choppin ya thin, till ya look like a starving Somalian shin.. I don’t got to use fifty tools, to cut em down to a pygmies stool I admit the grit is cruel, and unusual…like piranhas in a kiddie pool but this just the opening chapter, ya deaths a joke, this is ultra keen laughter Turn ya face to a fine dot, start the bonfire an get ya pine box potently lacquered Still got a heart beat, fuq it, ether is embalming, it courses through ya fluidly, Its sordid with a soothing beat, decreasing tempo, I’ll record it for ya eulogy in ya mothers eyes, appeared dismay, despite the fear portrayed… I took her weeping face, to an open sheathe an blade to wipe her tears away Take that b***h by the throat…pourin cement into her vitals.. Simple an psycho, I’mm let it dry wit ya dads dick in her eye holes… see if they can discern da loss, u’ve been dead, now ya urn to pawn.. Reenact sacrifice: nail dem to a burnin cross..Seculars in da church of God.. put it out before there nerves are gone..then steep em in permafrost.. Time for practical annihilation, wit jagged rocks I’ll rub ya dads clavical an spine till scraped thin.. Havoc loathed to rise from Satan, down for the cause..machete in hand like radical an violent Hatians..
Sinceer	[no subject] 17 Years Ago This is from a diss cypher on another site...we were just goin at it for a lil while...other dude is pretty good... theres some personals an references you might not get...but o well.. here ya go... IF UR really bored... lol Phantom in red Secular in blue(ME) _________________________ Hol Up Lemme Get On Yallz Level .... Drops Off The Cliff Top And Opens Parachute @ 500 feet Metapho? From The Start of This, I Been "Bar~Buryin" Like "CONAN N**A!" Cuz U Playin In Phanz Court, N Im So "Just~Ice" I Made A Snowman Shiver! U Type "Hold Hands With A", Fg, 'Stand Up Type?' Then Ill "Christopher Reeves Ya" N War? But Only Time "4Get About It!", Was When He Had "Instant Amnesia!" So Now Ur 'On Your Way To Being Fucked!', its Like Givin "Directions To A W*e!" Cuz U've Just 'Produced A Target!', Met Must Be In The Food "Section Of A Store!" So Juss "Picture Him Askin Friends", Diss~Cypher! Who's "Sicker Than Half Of Them?" Phan Man! Cuz He's Got Such An 'Initial Responce', Its Like he's "Deliverin Acronyms!" Same personals, Sum1 Lettum No! I Neva "Met~A~Foe" I Couldnt Shred Wit Flows ... N If I "Get My hands On These Cabbage Patch Kids", They'll B Screamin "Lettuce Go!" Iigh Met .... Gonna Use Sumthin New This Time Or Diss Ma Girl For The 50th Time? _________ fuq some new shhit...imma burn that bittches house down aight start with phans whip first...aka his bittches moms hooptie.. Phan at da throne, built by his chick...hes' no one a NEWB WOULD BOW TOO.. when ya girls suckin dick, i'll trade her in..based on her BLEW-BOOK-VALUE lets bring it back to grade school... he a PAWN TO A HENCHMEN...teach ya girl a lesson...da BROTHELS IN SESSION.. GARBLE MA ESSENCE...choke da bittch out wit da ck..all DOGS GO TO HEAVEN... (lets reminisce a lil more)) she an angel now...dont stress, cuz i never came devout.. back of her Corolla...ironic...cuz first i Cranked...but never Yanked it out... (Adam corola-made Crank yankers..) i'm a titan STUFFIN DIS ROGER...HUNTIN YA HONOR>> let da shells hit ya, turn ya red...like BUD WIT CLAMADA... this just da kindling, havent even brought da gas out.. _________ GET FAMILIAR !!!! .... Cuz Phanz Been 'Wreck'N~Eyes', Distortin ya Visions! n Wit Ya Proportions Of Gimicks! You Should Take Ya Raps To Abortional Clinics! Sec? Im "Droppin The Obscenities!", N Thanks For "Stoppin In To Mention Me"! But Wars The 'Beauty Of The Beast', N Thats Why U Lost Ya "Topic Wit The Entity!" ___ think ya can spit a VERSE OR TWO?? "N Thanks For "Stoppin In To Mention Me"! .before that..da ave never HEARD OF YOU>> they know secular...currupted CHURCH IS PROOF>..u lookin NERVOUS DUDE>>> dont let ya 'Blank mind', resort to stealin lines from MURDA MOOK>>> (EZ) _____ F*a Sec .. Gimme A Min ... Lmao! We Only 'Member' What U Said, Cuz U Got So Many "Low-Blows In Ya Verse Swine!", "Bro, Go Wit Rehearsed Lines", Cuz Keystylin? Sec The New "Virgin / Version Of Wackness", "Oh No, Its Ya First Time?", Well "Homo, I Disperse Shine" Talk About me Bitin? HA! This "Hoe Knows That The Verse Mine!", Cuz Its Filled Wit "Dope Flows An Absurd Rhymes!", An I'd Ask U To Battle ... AGAIN! ... But On Second Thought ... U'd Most Likely NO-SHOW FOR THE THIRD TIME!!! Third Times The Charm Hunnybuns ____ da rumor is...phan..a lyric or a dick biter?? u might as well lick diapers.. an who da fuq uses fake personals in a Diss-Cypher.. we see phans value...he just amounts-to-ck...Sec or a minute...u till on da dick around-da-clock.. we can see ya gay from mountain tops, even from around da block..ya soft stickin it in ya girls flower pot....so Phan's urge for protection, he just turn da power off....(surge) dude has to use a d*o^^ now we like...YOUS DA BH WIT C*S IN TEETH...with all ya PUTRID SPITS ACROSS DA KEYS.. you just LOSIN CHIPS TO FLOP WITH ME...prewrites? u all about the Plan it (planet)stages...like LUDACRIS AN TOMMY LEE! _____ I Was Gonna Write A Bar in Responce To Seculars Last Comment .... But Then i Remembered This .... KO .... Nuff Said .... _______ pathetic Phan... ex girlfriends pic still in ya sig.. postin up old battles... Stop livin in da past ! ___ Sec? We New U A Fg, Cuz 'Syn~In~Him', But It's "NOTHIN, I BROUGHT ANTONYMS!!" If Its Beef? Then Watch Me 'Get In~Secs as', Like Im "F*n A Wasps Abdomen!!" Neglect The Magic Of The Power? Who's Gon "Protect These F**s In This Hour!?" U Both Sweet Bytches ... Aint Got No Buzz, So I'll "Infect Ya Static Wit The Sour!" Im Laughin At U Cowards, So Hungry For War, Even The "Napkins Get Devoured!" While Yall Juss 'Washed Up An Rusty', Like "Inspector Gadget In The Shower" ... So Who Hates? Raps? But What Ya Most "Likely Brought Is The New Fake!" Cuz Yall Wouldnt "Pack Heat" If You Carried "ICEY HOT IN YA SUITCASE"! Niggaz Juss Betta Stay "Humble An Travel",* Cuz Tha Way Phan Manz 'Breakin News' Gotchu "STUCK ON THE CHANNEL!!" Im"All Over The Crown",Gotchu Callin Me "UNCLE ENAMEL", Those Who "Rumble Get Trampled!", Ma Words so Street, Im "MUMBLIN GRAVEL!", While Me An ya B*h 'Humpin so much', It's Like The Hunchback Of Notre Damm FN A CAMEL! Time To Eradicate An Eliminate Them For Good ... Money ... !! Every "Curse Words Grim When Im Spittin this", Yea I Gotta BIG Third Leg, Dats Why i "MURK NERDS LIMBS WHEN IM KICKIN It!" How Can U Not No Im Married? even ma "WORST VERBS HINT IM COMMITTED BH!" so now ya 'lifes on the line', like "Earthworm Jim On A Fishin Trip!" ____ ha ... tru... i just saw this.. ill be back in a few __________ Phan, you've been a nice lady... i think you deserve this: ___________ I�ll concoct a noun, ya DROPPIN DOWN IN KIMBO STANCE, ----i'm shhutttin you up, with a CK IN MOUTH, A SIMPLE PLAN.. wit �tight end� to da line SOFTEN CLOUT WIT WINSLOW HANDS..leave ya smashed on da street like KNOCKIN OUT MA WINDOW PHAN.. This BEANER WIT A PONCHO, talkin dat st, u da LEADER OF DA GROTTOES, married an fertile�prolly TREAT HER TO DA COMPOST I�m shakin it up like SEIZURES AN A LONG STROKE�he a real bittch, leave this f***t pealed quick like CHIQUITAS IN DA CONGO. Talkin tru, theres no DEBATIN WIT DA LIFELESS, I�m not gay, �phannie may� lose interest like skippin PAYMENTS TO DA CLIENTS�. RACING WITH DA LIGHT SCRIPTS.. eVASIVE WIT YA LICENSE, ya �gassed out in a death race� like Jason STATHAM WIT A HYBRID don�t black-out, cuz �Eye Q a ward� off DHA�like `TIM ROBBINS CHOSEN BY PHANS` we see ya girl, ---she leaves diss Kid Rocked --like SPIN OFFS, THE ROASTIN OF PAM.. whos shootin?---u �aint dodgin bullets� like S-service wit LYNCH MOBS ON OBAMAS FAM. i
Xeru	[no subject] 17 Years Ago I see you are still killin it Sin... We should have a freestyle tournament with all the guys in here that fashion themselves as battlers... That would be fun as hell... and then have people judge the battles... Man that would be fun...
Xeru	[no subject] 17 Years Ago Ok i guess i'ma have to pick a fight with somebody to get this s**t going...
Xeru	[no subject] 17 Years Ago I"m callin you out Nikaule you wanna brawl? lol Comeeeeeeeeeee onnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
Nik'aule	[no subject] 17 Years Ago Sweet-T, u the only one to fashion yourself If u wanted to play nice u should have battled yourself This hospice is not vacant, I have no patients Let you go to hell waiting, Satan was saving A special seat, For anyone special enough to come against me... I'm your messiah, I spit fiyah that corrodes st like the ten plagues from moses my range flows ova ya whole crew So what do you think gonna happen when its just YOU? Lone soldier going against the fourth reich check ya height... you must be this tall measure up from ya feet and down from ya balls and you lacking in the latter stepping up with battle banter and no topic matter... how you gonna pop st, when you call me out here and didn't even drop st? you like an ant under my left shoe before you could even think of a line to spit i left u in awe in amazement, behind the start line like the hare in the fable so "X"eru becomes another one of the X's I leave behind i aint even gonna flex st till u speak your mind... do ya thang, T
Xeru	[no subject] 17 Years Ago Sweet T? Call me "Sweet dreams" or fucked up nightmare... The night assassin with the "Kruger" glove battlin the Black " Annie Lennox" with no hair... I dont "play" nice i'm just nice as it is... Save the tough talk for those who dont know you its all apart of your show biz... How can you save me a seat with Satan when I raised you from a kid... How can you be my Messiah when you came from "my" rib... Stop the madness this smoke screen is hazardous... And you trying to jump just a couple of levels over me is borderline blasphemous... The lone soldier in this fourth reich just happens to be hitler... Commanding word armies while you chew bubble gum and suck on twizzlers... You right I was just bored and wanted you to hit back... Cause I knew you couldnt resist running up in the projects like Pookie feinin for crack... So take that and some of this too... This has been a bored as f**k message from your illadelph sponsor... Z to the E R U lol Doont hurt me too bad "C" lol
Nik'aule	[no subject] 17 Years Ago Z-E-R-U? I took the X back, trick And put it with ya "Lax" battle raps To always inspire your best st... Backwards... U-R nothing without me E-Z like mac and cheese or we feels I run ya name in the mud like four wheels or the soles of adidas nightmares? please, i put holes in the reaper i take souls of believers and you're a fan, stan like you rose from the bleachers damn well, HAIL... i'm hitler, mussolini and mao dictating diction with friction action and passion u bitching wishing you never asked for the last one that was the beginning and now its all in the past son your future is dim cause u beckoned a star to outshine every lame as little battle rhyme you can find in ya mind time... is short for ya career like hanson or b2k a*s kickings free today move along with the glee parade ... Cheerleader _______ Do we keep it going? :P (Your whole verse was sick like tuberculosis and AIDS in a beaker)
Xeru	[no subject] 17 Years Ago Nothing without you? Of your current style i'm the physical manifestation... The Primary Signer on your Hip Hop/imagination lyric application... You didnt take the "X" back you should let that pass... Because when it comes to your everlasting search for Muses "Z"' represents your last... Or your hopes for a symbol " Lucky Charms" like a "four leafed clover"... Suffering from "Multiple personality/spirit disorder" like "Sybil" tellin me " Dont Make you Over"... This is like the I.R.S(iris) giving you a audit and your rendition is third rate plaster... Your relevence is played out like "Jay-Z" so you morphed into a "Swagga Jacka"... Run my name threw the ground? I'm Regal, 7years your legal, piercin like a needle, hittin niggaz with "Truth" like "Siegal"... My young "padawon" like Obi wan I deserve respect... How dumb is it to fight me with my sword style when I am the Architect... Thats how Anakiin got fucked up... And "Fyree" roughed up... Your aspirations have run a muck... So I broke your legs like Camel clutch... Gettin smoked like "Dutch"... ("E"-lackin) like cyber crutch... "E'luakin" Reversed "Nikaul'e" ("E'-mail) And it didnt take much... Now that I put your crooked a*s back on track... "You areeeeeeeeeeeeee easy" Now that ZERU-(UREZ) looks back... Because it doesnt take obnoxiousness... To kill with Tact... Ya !Bastid Rat...(Rat Bastid) lol I was just going to let you win that one but i got bored again so hit me back when you get a chance... Great response man you had me laughin and sayin damn lol
Sinceer	[no subject] 17 Years Ago I stay high on most of Nikaules drops.... but i got to give it too Zeru plain an simple... his initial was aight, but the responses have been fire...

Xeru	[no subject] 17 Years Ago Thanks foor the vote of confidence Sin but ummmm.. You gonna wind up gettin me fucked up lol hahahahahahaha
Xeru	[no subject] 17 Years Ago come on peoples i wanna see some writing some battling some intriguing dialog lets spark a convo that changes the world... create introspective.. hold your mind accountable and direct some potency and growth back into this thing...
Li Li	[no subject] 17 Years Ago Business oriented hip-hop writers... if you are interested in ghost-writing... hit me up. Trying to find a person who knows his st... if you don't know your st... can't follow a beat... can't rhyme... stop reading now and walk away. If you believe you have talent that should go further.... can listen to an instrumental and create gold.... hit me up. This is serious... not just some bullshit as statement an online stranger makes. All ya'll know me in here. Well... should know me any ways. I'm the moderator d***t. Lol I'll be looking forward to seeing who replies. Love!
Sinceer	[no subject] 17 Years Ago quick, bored write.. (ignores Zeru...)) no one doubts the form of Sin, it a take Brimstone an fire to back down da origins an da crown of morbid sense, states of chaos without ignoring a County ordinance... i stay disruptin the gates, lose ya self an get stuck wit a blade, spillin ya guts on da stage and those frontin to play...get sacrificed, an get offered now, its a Slaughter House like Joe Buddens mix tape deez are gold pounds for actors, im da road to Eldorado, da location when Edgar Allan Poe found his rapture inspiring a flow bound to crack ya, while u slow down for asthma, i've sold out da rafters for an apprentice i evoke sounds to master, launchin more careers then a showdown with Motown and Nasa till i'm on my last leg, humpin ya mother i'll stay 'robbin' ya will, like im jumpin wit flubber lol
Xeru	[no subject] 17 Years Ago lol@Sin.. Yeah you know i get carried away man daggggggggggggg. lol Killer flo and you are right... Nobody doubts the form of Sin. I never understood ghostwriting. Because once a person stops ghostwriting for you. Then what...
Xeru	[no subject] 17 Years Ago You are right Sin. Thats why i hate all them niggaz. They destroyed hip hop just because of that. Frauds invade our culture and poison our children with a inconsistent message. The only thing that is consistent is to w***e yourself for money and other masonic values. They murdered the culture. I believe killin the music was one of the first overhauls that came via the new world order. Jay-Z being the main one
Xeru	[no subject] 17 Years Ago Puffy started it.. Jay-Z finished it
Sinceer	[no subject] 17 Years Ago HA u had that swagger jacker punch against Nik....lol which doesnt help help Jayzs' case in any way.... i mean, im guilty to enjoyin a good flow and beat, most of these commercial raps out, thats all it is...club jams and teenie raps.... Its fucken awful though foreal, i loathe, detest, and detrimentally hate the fact that real lyrics get no cash or air time.... closest we've seen underground music make a vanguard attempt, was Handle Bars- ....HA good song, but cmon, so many other quality artists out there...
Sinceer	[no subject] 17 Years Ago Somethin i wrote to warm up for this vocab tourney... darkness, the mask to render, trekking unto paths to enter seek to ask the shepherd, first u must grasp the jagged scepter and embrace hardship, for the days’ parchment will brave homage, as varmints dig a partnership, spreading arsenic as their plagues promise days bonded, while the bodies armor less to these pathogens each latescent, fact of men, urges for me to raise the staff again feeding bodies to the bond fire, to taunt ire, with bare hands building Gods pyre, nothing spared and, latent cadence of the hatred emblazes from my palms choir ashes whirl heeding Gregarian rights, seethe no longer sieges a nefarious plight unbeknownst to nature, erasing the nomenclature, the nameless Chariots rise against detriments I’m no longer sparing the tide, casting hellanodic wisdom the final gambit in this time of havoc, bringing harmony with a melodic vision
Li Li	[no subject] 17 Years Ago I need help guys! If you have a myspace page... please go to www.myspace.com/thetonyjtrafficmusicawards and vote for me as poet of the year! This is a HUGE St. Louis event, and I'm up against all these college students/grads. I'm the only "street" poet... so I need some help getting this award. When you go to the myspace page... add Tony J as a friend... and then leave comments voting Li Li as poet of the year. If you don't want to friend Tony J... you can send private messages voting instead of comments. There is NO voting limit. You can vote as many times as you like. It's all of you that have helped to get me this far with my writing. And, I truly have and still do appreciate it. Otherwise, I'd still be writing in the closet... locking the notebook in the safe where nobody could read it. My love to all!