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Winner Declared-Sinceer19 Years AgoBATTLE RAP
Brax Vs. Sinceer *WINNER SINCEER* Deadline for first submission: Friday, February 9th. Submissions may be posted sooner. Deadline for retaliation piece: Saturday, February 10th. Voting begins Friday, or when the submissions are entered in the forum. Voting deadline is Sunday February 11th. Winners will be declared Monday, February 12th. Have fun!!!! |
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[no subject]19 Years AgoJus let me put on da beats
when it comes to-- your defeat ---No need to be on da creep, you jus anotha piece of dirt to sweep... into the dust pan, cant beat me... I got da masta plan... After battln me--------- you'll be runnin' round wit ur head cut off like our current president that's in off' memba these words are comin right off da top my head.. you still learin da alphabet all drenched wit ur own sweat Its all good G --atleast it's not a bet Dis time I'll take it easy... jus think of it as a freebie.. a cure for ur disease--- you can't battle verbally-- can't ya see--- all ur peices that I read are incarcerated-- need to be freed - If tell'n what is---- is my charge guilty is my plea One more rhyme to tell you... you need to step it up dude... I'll even let you re-do what you said you construe Ur already dead--completely whack you coming in here blindly---- S**t--it's like going to iraq |
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[no subject]19 Years AgoI threw in some wordplay..I'm not gonna explain any of it, just look out for it before voting...
U look dumb-to-say, staring at my gun-to-spray, my threats-pound-ya-quick-killed,-so just-runaway, U dont perfect sound, u dont think ill to come, we can see ya ink spill to run like wet-counterfeit-bills-in-a-getaway (think about it) Im making a killing to see this gay thug-drop, I got high-graded-slewed-kills while ya rub-c***s, gettin jumped in the club-spots, gun at ya retina for braX2SEE like dilated-pupils-that-are-blood-shot (X2See=ecstasy) U dont free-b***h, I bring darkness like slave-attacks, its an eclipse, when my letters-fade-to-black, while u thinking the tail or fit ya dick to grind measured-flamers-a*s, u impaled ya dick to rip spines like a shredded-paper-back (tailor fitthink about it) I checked ya picture dude, ya probably got on Docker shoes dressed to impress, but ya rhymes couldnt beat Dr Seuss in this game u tryin to rap bars, u couldnt hold the rock as a trap star and with a sock down ya pants is the only time u act hard You think ya flow is hot man? its as smooth as a blocked damn u just a con rapper, and I stop scams I burn to inferno theirs no hotter state u just an embarrassment like Nixon in Watergate |
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[no subject]19 Years Agoi'm a go with Sinceer although i think both of y'all came soft as a baby's bottom. i know Sin could do better but i don't really remember Brax battling much so i can't say about him...
Sinceer wins |
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[no subject]19 Years AgoMy gawd this is a hard vote.....sheesh.....
I'm going to have to give it to Sinceer.....there was two lines that really got me.... I checked ya picture dude, ya probably got on Docker shoes dressed to impress, but ya rhymes couldnt beat Dr Seuss That was original. Come on Brax....I'm waiting on the retaliation piece....This is VERY close...things could turn around. Good job to the both of you. :) |
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[no subject]19 Years Agosin takes it. he came harder. waiting to see the retaliation
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[no subject]19 Years AgoYeah Sinceer gets it for witty punchlines and flow.
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[no subject]19 Years Agoaw s**t
god damn sheesh wdf man wow im speechless at the utter baby back broke back montain kinda rhymes were just spit hahaha i love those adjectives i jokin kids good battle but homie sin won that one with the dr.suess line ::biggrin:: |
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[no subject]19 Years Agooh damn.
Sin took it. I was lovin the last stanza. it prolly wasnt the best stanza, but it reminded me of da way I write. brax wuz good though. |
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[no subject]19 Years Ago************************************************************************************************************************** Mr. "C'mon, think about it..." S**t... Time to flip da script.. your s**t is smellin like syphillis c**t got flashed by da voters' tit but you still a little b***h You bout redemption... hense then----- to redeem your self by hitting yourself below da belt having to go to da voters for help-- Your already dead from your mind lisp by da end of today you be endin' up like anna nicole smith.. s**t.. you already got da p***y drip Jsells said u had a thing fo da old man's dick S**T---JSELLS --SPIT SOMETHING QUICK TAKING TWO BATTLES ON DA FLIP SIN-SEER--A BINGE QUEER-- HIS ONLY FEAR IS DAT AT DA END OF DA NIGHT WHEN HE LOSES JSELLS WONT WIPE AWAY HIS TEAR THEY BE IN LONG DISTANCE RELATIONS HAVING INTERNET SEX AND CONGRE-GAY-TIONS YOU EXPLAIN YOUR BATTLES THROUGHOUT YOUR PIECE THAT IS ELEMENTARY, YOU SMOKKN DA WRONG TREES CANT YOU SEE , i MADE YA THINK YOU HAD ME BEAT TRICK OR TREAT---- WELCOME TO YOUR DEFEAT--- |
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[no subject]19 Years Agowow double wammy dissin jay sells and sinceer
uh oh so i smell some net beef ~ watches for the ending ~ |
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[no subject]19 Years Agowhere's seer at?
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[no subject]19 Years AgoYa rhymes is all a*s like trapped fumes
f**k sweepin, ill choke ya with the chord from my vacuum u cant elapse doom, i will haunt thee paper towel while u bust a nut is only time u Brawny u retaliate calmly, rage is a mystery u just a nice guy, straight chicken like rotisserie Im rooted in the underground, have ya trip on words I could go a hundred rounds, Ill rip ya verbs so just cower you coward you s**t from nerves Im the limb keeper for the grim reaper , Hades was SINS teacher, comin out ya speakers, u lack the shots, like diabetics with seizures I spawn hatred I just arouse fear so just say goodbye and do the WAVElike when crowds cheer specifically I strangle suckers like the stratosphere (thin air) syllables stand systematically in spars with sinceer ya retaliations a joke, tryin to trash a martyr its funny to me cuz you put the laugh in slaughter ur in class a nerd, b***h thinking he is fast with words death occurs, but im not Fifty, still coming with this Massacre ur pathetic with a diss, with aids you wouldnt be ill with spits Im like Achilles to have ya body dragged, no burial like in the Iliad ya p***y lips drag in the streets, you aint the man with the heat, when Sin comes u look like a pitbull eating a sandwich with ham with the cheese with down syndrome |
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[no subject]19 Years Agohand down seer won
jesus i wanna battle him that would be fun other c**k smith u put up a good fight |
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[no subject]19 Years Agoseer took it
it was more and he came harder i am saddened |
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[no subject]19 Years AgoQuote:
Originally posted by Sinceer Ya rhymes is all a*s like trapped fumes f**k sweepin, ill choke ya with the chord from my vacuum u cant elapse doom, i will haunt thee paper towel while u bust a nut is only time u Brawny u retaliate calmly, rage is a mystery u just a nice guy, straight chicken like rotisserie Im rooted in the underground, have ya trip on words I could go a hundred rounds, Ill rip ya verbs so just cower you coward you s**t from nerves Im the limb keeper for the grim reaper , Hades was SINS teacher, comin out ya speakers, u lack the shots, like diabetics with seizures I spawn hatred I just arouse fear so just say goodbye and do the WAVElike when crowds cheer specifically I strangle suckers like the stratosphere (thin air) syllables stand systematically in spars with sinceer ya retaliations a joke, tryin to trash a martyr its funny to me cuz you put the laugh in slaughter ur in class a nerd, b***h thinking he is fast with words death occurs, but im not Fifty, still coming with this Massacre ur pathetic with a diss, with aids you wouldnt be ill with spits Im like Achilles to have ya body dragged, no burial like in the Iliad ya p***y lips drag in the streets, you aint the man with the heat, when Sin comes u look like a pitbull eating a sandwich with ham and the cheese with down syndrome |
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[no subject]19 Years Agoi edited the last line...instead of "with ham with the cheese"
i meant to say "with ham and the cheese" nice battle though Brax.. |
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[no subject]19 Years Agowhut the f**k is this about J sells???? thass funny though man. ya bast'd!!
but sin took it again. |
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[no subject]19 Years AgoImma be honest. I'm looking at this if it was on a stage and not "written" word. It was really intellectual for a battle. The words were slick as hell from both pieces and artists. But honestly, yawll would be booed off a stage, cause people and the event aren't about wordplay and putting stuff in parenthesis.
The retaliation piece by Brax was the truest to the form. And I'm the oddball, by looking at it like this, and I know I'm taking it the wrong way. But Brax won, to me. |
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[no subject]19 Years Agovote goes to sin
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