Phantastic Phantasy Forum Descend

Hello there, I am Xerclipse and I have been working on my story Descend. It is a western dark fantasy story. There is alot of violence and monsters here.  If you send a review, then I would gladly appreciate it. Just be honest. If you want me to read your fantasy stories, then post them in this thread. The link leads to the story where the dark and action packed fantasy begins.