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Brandee D. Hack

All About the Poetry

15 Years Ago

Hello everyone!

Well I have been published before, but it was when I was about 14 and I am now much older and would like to get published again if possible. Maybe make a book of poetry. I'm sure that I have enough poetry to make a book. Below I have posted some poetry that stood out that I wrote...so please give me some feed-back and tell me what you think... Also, if you are a publisher and think I should be published or really like my work, then please let me know. A:so, if you like this, feel free to check out and comment on some of my other pieces.

Thank you!

Brandee D. Hack

Muse of My Heart A Poem by Brandee D. Hack

My musical muse: "There is Love" by Bradley Joseph and "Endless Love" from Final Fantasy IV My actual muse: Matthew <3

My soul melts with you.
Every time we touch,
you show me new stars.
The stars that can be created.

My dearest love,
You are the key to my piano.
You give me breath.
You are my heart; now and forever.

The day we met, not so long ago,
you touched by heart.
You made me glow.
You are truly my last show.

Words can try to describe how I feel.
But the heart only shows it.
You have opened my heart and became its seal.
You are my haven from this crypt.

We embrace and my hands tremble,
noting only places you slide down...
Darling,
You are my life's desire.
Music aside; you are my life's wire.

Your kiss makes my heart soar,
just the same as you opening my door.
You have truly made me see
everything I am - all that I can be.

You are my love and my heart,
from you I never wish to be apart.
Until my heart stops beating...
I will forever be yours.

<3

An embraceable of change with obstacles...

Strange wisps of wind
they covet the night.
Breezes uncover,
change what might.

Love is in the air
a twist of fate...
Remember the winds
the desirable state.

Fire and Ice...
they meet at the rise
the sun falling quickly
the ice to be the prize.

Now the air is filled
spindles of confusion array.
Loves serendipitous hold
keeps it all the same.

Now off to the garden we go,
off to make this right.
ask the sidhe to bring down the rain...
wash troubles away; make bright.

To Y.

A thousand tears I've cried tonight,

hoping you'll come back.

My broken heart falls apart

and despair is the name I bear.

What muse once showed me

the passion of words?

He is gone forever

and I will always cry.

I just wanted something simple

in a beautiful disaster it seems.

But he will never know

after the German whispers their silence.

He still has my heart

it's in a music box you see.

He left it in this postcard

that is in Germany.

I thought there was more than that

a beauty to withstand.

Two writers with deep passion

of what is thy command?

So here I sit in the shadows,

crying and singing a song.

Those sweet melodies I once heard

will forever be his song.

He left today without a goodbye.

With this I broke in two.

All I want is to is talk to you.

But I guess I never will and will continue to cry.

I never even got to say goodbye!

Tears roll down my cheek

that's all I can think...

is why did you have to leave this way?

It's like I'm drowning in tears

I cannot sleep.

As much as I have tried,

it's just you that I seek.

I want to make a wish

and hope you make it too.

That one day we'll wake up

and talk beneath the moon.

I heard an old story once,

it said no matter where you are,

you always share something with the other side.

I want to share the moon.

I want to look at it and think of you,

and hope that you'll think of me too.

It seems childish I know,

but I want to have you wherever I go.

So please come and say goodbye,

I don't want you to leave me and hide.

I miss you and it hurts the way you left.

Now there will forever be a scar on my chest.

Written by music... please enjoy!

How beautiful it seems to me

a dance we have begun to play,

Our heartbeats rest like her call

how the mind is strikingly beautiful.

Two ventures as one melody

how lovely it is to hear.

One piece of the wind humming

and guitars twisting their chords.

Then brisk whispers are intriguing

my love I feel your presence in here.

Show me what you will darling.

I beseech you. Take me still?

Beautiful melodies dance round this fire

as such a tune I am accustomed to.