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I'm new & would like some feedback on my first chapter

12 Years Ago


I've been writing a few blogs for years - mostly humor/satire, and some inspiration.  I'm pretty new at fiction, and I love the idea of sweet romance and pure first kisses.  This first chapter doesn't reflect that sweet romance just yet, but I'd like to get some feedback.

The title of the book is Brave.