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Hi ! If anyone could just take time out

12 Years Ago


...and review my poem "War Love"..I have some views but don't really know what you guys think about it..please ???

Re: Hi ! If anyone could just take time out

12 Years Ago


Her eyes were brown,
With streaks of golden in them,
Golden enough to reveal,
The glimpse of fire within.

LOVE THIS PART! I enjoyed reading the whole thing! It was good Hope! Keep Writing!