Want Some Reviews? Forum Review for return review

Hey guys, 
Please review my writing :) Any and all feedback is welcome- both positive and negative :) I'm just trying to improve my work- but we all know that can't be done without help- Therefore I will review anyone who reviews my stuff so that we can all have the chance to improve our (already wonderful :P ) work haha 

This is a great idea, if anyone reviews my work, I'll review their work in exchange.

I reviewed both of you and would appreciate one in return.  You are both good writers and I would respect your opinions.

Hey! I'll review your work! I'm new at this and i write in a rush so i know my works not that great but thats why i'd like to improve :) id be more than willing to reveiw your work in exchange!

Okay, Amber.  You're on!  I reviewed your two chapters.