Want Some Reviews? Forum New to this

Hey. I'm new to this site. I like to write fictional stories. Most of what I post on here will be raw, and unedited or revised so prepare yourselves for errors. I like to just jump in and start writing then reread it repeatedly later to fix things, and even then sometimes I miss things. So if you see anything point it out to me ok? I mainly just want an opinion on if you think the story is good so far or not. This particular one I started a long time back and have been working on it again I am currently working on the end of chapter one so when it is done I will post it later. Right now I only have the prologue up. Let me know what you think.

K I'll go check it out.