Want Some Reviews? Forum New here

I'm new here, just signed up. I'm looking for some feedback. I only have one piece of writing right now, a short story, but plan to add more as I tackle the blank page.

I'll gladly review your work if you give my book's first chapter a review. I've been trying to make friends on here that will actually review my stuff so I can go onto chapter 2 without having to rewrite an entire book by the middle of it. 

Hi,