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Looking For Some Feedback

10 Years Ago


I'm looking for some feedback on my newest chapter, thank you! 

Plot: THERE ONCE EXISTED A TIME WHERE THE THIRTEEN ZODIACS LIVED IN PEACEFUL HARMONY. ARIES, TAURUS, GEMINI, CANCER, LEO, VIRGO, LIBRA, SCORPIO, SAGITTARIUS, CAPRICORN, AQUARIUS, PISCES AND CARPERE RULED WITH BENEVOLENCE AND JUSTICE. ON ONE FATEFUL DAY, ARIES PROCLAIMED THAT SHE RECEIVED A PROPHECY THAT SHOWED THAT CARPERE, THE THIRTEENTH ORACLE, WOULD BRING A REIGN OF DARKNESS AND MASSACRE. HOPING TO AVOID THAT FATE, THE ZODIACS BANISH CARPERE INTO THE SHADOWS. HURT AND BETRAYED, HE VOWED THAT ONE DAY, HE WOULD RETURN AND PUNISH THEM. THIRSTY FOR REVENGE, CARPERE BEGAN TO BUILD A GREAT ARMY. TO FIGHT HIS ARMY, THE ZODIACS CREATED THEIR OWN ELITE ARMY - THE REGENT. TWELVE DEFENDERS ARE CHOSEN LEAD THE ARMY, KNOWN AS THE ORACLES. NOW AND FOREVER, THEY FIGHT TO PROTECT THEIR PEOPLE OR DIE TRYING.

You can find the first chapter here -> 

THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH!

Re: Looking For Some Feedback

10 Years Ago



Love some reviews as well.  Quick easy read..let me know your thoughts.  Just posted first two chapters so far.