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may i sing a song to soothe my soul
may i dance a little to lure my heart
may i drink a little to sedate my brain
may i cloak a little to hide my wound
may i wash face a little to deceive my tears
may i lie a little to laugh at my accusations
may i write a little to say my dismay
may i shout a little to beat my solitude
may i forget a little to change my destination
may i live a little to lay forever
may i close my eyes a little to prevent the glare
may i run a little to be never chased
may i fall asleep to wake up to a saving grace