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Sweetheart you're the best part of my midnight dreams. You're the most amazing blossom of a flower is what I mean. Your thoughts keep me at the edge of my seat. So let me keep a part of your soul So that I may learn from it Kiss on my neck, the one you bit. And take care of my heart That's been shot down by many darts. Show me your mind. And be kind Be gentle Hope you're satisfied with me because I know you've been around. But darling please consider the diamonds on my crown. I've worked hard to keep them And I will never let my crown lean down Because baby you're King and a queen is what you need around.