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A leaf falls gracefully to the sidewalk. Perfect, Unblemished. Thunder rumbles and lightning flashes. Disturbing, Yet strangely fitting. Raindrops splash on my face. Chilly, But they hide the tears. The setting in this desolate park is familiar, Comforting. It feels, For the first time in a while, Real. Right. It feels like I'm going to be ok... Without you. Please tell me what you think of this, it's a very personal price so I'd appreciate some thoughts.

I think it's beautiful! Descriptive and imaginative writing is always thought provoking! Good job!