Want Some Reviews? Forum Hello to the world of writers

So what to say, I'm a unpublished writer with dreams. I have a full manuscript ready to read, review and edit but I don't think its going to get posted for a little bit longer. Anyway I'm posting poems and short stories for now and hope to get great feedback or a slap on the wrist for bad humor. Any review is appreciated and I hope to reviews great stories from all of you as well.