Want Some Reviews? Forum The Kitten Who Couldn't See

Hello there! I'm Yukiru Kannadzuki, an aspiring author. I prefer to write psychological and/or fantasy pieces, but for a few reasons have never made it past chapter 1. I'd rather not blame anyone else, but it does feel like I only receive compliments on the work. It's really frustrating, so please tell me why you hate my characters, nitpick, and generally s**t on the pieces. I'd like to focus on short pieces here, geared toward certain skills like dialogue, setting impact, or how to use uncommon words naturally. Thanks~ I look forward to our mutual improvement.