Want Some Reviews? Forum I Will Review Your Work

I would welcome your view of my work. Good or bad it would be appreciated.

If you're still looking to review some poems I'd love to get some feedback. I'm just starting with this. 

Hi. I'm new to WritersCafe too. If you could, can you please review Nocturne? Thank you.

hi, im daisy and I am a new writer, a beginner altho i have had a passion for writing all my life. I am starting a memoir about a particularly painful time in my life and would love a review from u. I have only one page to submit at this time and still have to learn how to submit it but when I do will u please take a look. This project means the world to me. Thx!

Hi! 

Please review my work. 
I only have one story published here at the moment. hope its good :)

If you would like to review my latest book (The Jade Buddha) please let me know. I have written 5 novels over the years and have two more in the stocks. You can reply to me directly here rossclarke7@yahoo.co.uk

Hi. Thanks for the offer. I'd appreciate any insights you'd care to share.

Hey there! Can you please review my work? I would be so grateful! 
I'm a beginner definitely - this is my first attempt at writing (I'm trying to write a book, I left the first chapter on my profile). 

Hi! I love reading, so late last year I started to write some ideas and short stories. I've started writting stories but lately I'm all on poetry.

Hi! I love reading, so late last year I started to write some ideas and short stories. I've started writting stories but lately I'm all on poetry.

Hi. I have 1 story posted so far. Not very long. I'm a beginner/intermediate. But please grade harshly and constructively. After you review mine let me know and ill check out any of yours. 

Hi! I am an aspiring writer and new to the site, I would be so grateful if you could review a couple of my pieces. Thank you so much!

Hi!
I would love for you to review my work. I joined today, so I only have a teeny tiny bit here. but it's my greatest idea for quite a while now. 
I enjoy writing, and even though I only do it for fun (and not being particularly good at it) I sometimes daydream about becoming a writer. Sigh*

Well, here you go:

The sunshine dances like pixies on the water surface, for the day is about to disappear and soon, the night will rule. I inhale the air. There's something different about the air here. It's fresh and delicate, with a touch of salt. This place, at the rocks by the sea, is filled with memories. Happy memories, sorrowful memories, thoughtful memories, the list goes on. Nature is fully alive here. The grass is dry, yet pleasant. The rocks and seashells by the shore are pure joy and fun. And the ocean. The ocean is where my heart belongs. The powerful, yet gentle waves. The essence of this place calms me. I stop daydreaming the moment Rocky sneaks up behind me. My beloved Border Collie has not yet learned, that I can sense him more than the other two legged creatures. The moment he jumps at me, I turn around and catch him. "Aww, what a sweet dog, Rocky!" I laugh as he tries to escape my grab. I know exactly when he's had enough, and let go. He lays down beside me, and I reach out to brush my fingers through his soft fur, and he is happily wagging his tail. "Beatrix" suddenly, a soft, well-known voice reach my ears. I turn my head to discover my dad, walking towards me, wearing his overalls, decorated with oil spots and holes. The used to be blue, but time has made them grey and old. It gives them some kind of personality, and they have somehow become a part of my dad. "Dinner's ready"

I'm not sure if you are still reviewing work because you've had so many requests, but I would love for you to read my writing.

Hi, this is TY! I'm new here & joined to get some ideas & help on my poetry & maybe even help some people too :)

Hi,

Hello!

Just posted my first poem on this site. It would be awesome if you'll leave a constructive review on my work. I will appreciate it.

I'm a beginner
please review my work^