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I'm currently working on a novel, and might eventually have the courage to share some excerpts, but I figured I would first share my writing style by publishing my most recent short story, written about 3 years ago. Reading through it myself, I definitely see some development between it and my current work, but can't see how I'd specifically alter it. I suppose I'm hoping to find some feedback that may help me identify certain things that are still common in my work, whether they be a talent or an area for development. Many thanks!!

You think we could trade a review for a review? If not, I'll still review your story if you message me the URL. I'm new to Writer's Cafe, looking to make some friends and network a little.