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I'm currently writing a novel called 'Welcome To The Family'. It's a Fantasy-Isekai sort of thing. Isekai is a Japanese Anime trope wherein characters from one world go to another. In this case: It's two brothers that get transported to a fantasy world and are turned into orcs once they arrive. The boys' backstory is that they are the last men in a family with a traditional military background that results in every single one of the men either being KIA or MIA, their father being one of them. 

Bear in mind: I'm writing a buildup to that event as I'm currently on Ch. 5. The event in which they're transported would be Ch. 6 or 7. I like to be a bit chronological in my timeline sometimes. 

Anyway, I am hoping that this is the first of a series of novels. I have a ton of ideas to go with, hopefully people like them! 

With regards, 

Citizen Student