Write = Get Reviews Forum "Conflict of Interest" - if an..

Hi, I'm new here and I've started a story that's a bit of a mix, but essentially a thriller/horror. I would love to get some feedback on how I'm going, as I haven't delved in this style much. It does go into some "background story" but I can assure plenty of action to follow! If anyone's interested, it's called 'Conflict of Interest'. I look forward to exploring this site for my story fix and I promise to review!