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Hello fellow writers!10 Years AgoI've been posting a few chapters of my novel The Ancient Breathes and I need some help. My English is average I'd say since I'm from Sweden.
I'm looking for advice on the pacing, story and describing the environment. I think the pacing and environment are my biggest issues. Thanks for your time! This is the link to my novel-> |
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