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Time after time I've felt my heart breaking I kept telling myself, staying is a mistake I'm making Thinking that it's normal or maybe I'm doing something wrong Or maybe he's not the one, this decision is taking too long The first time I forgave, thinking it won't happen again A lie I kept telling myself, to keep me from from going insane Heart break after heartbreak, my heart learned to deal Now I keep questioning myself on how I really feel

I really like this and I think you have some really good sounds to it. One thing I would suggest is maybe arranging it into stanzas or something a little more creative. You could do a lot of stuff with what you have here.