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This is the first poem I've written in a few years. I want opinions on how to make it better.

I wrote this story for class. Opinions?

I just wrote it out of boredom. It's nothing real good...

I am suppose to write a poem of what I fear...it's not done yet though

It's not really the best...but I think it's decent. ~stomp out the bullying~

eh, break up

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