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Italacized are the first letters of the first word of the first sentence of each new stanza. They spell the word "Unwritten".

Isn't there one?

I hurt them, they hurt me, but we are all in the same boat, ultimately....getting the short end of the stick somehow.

No, I wasn't trying to rhyme the whole time...just sort of going for flow...and a touch of form...

I was thinking about John Mayers song "Daughters"....Daddy's really need to love their daughters...we live and breath for their love...

Wrote this while listening to Anitra's Dance by Edvard Grieg....one of my favorite pieces....

Its that God/soul thing again :-)

Love, love, love...