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Was the bottle allegedly containing poison another red herring?

The Reverend Pickle wakes up in the night, scared and confused.

Emma encourages Barney to see his fears for what they are.

The Reverend Barney Pickle isn;t up to the strains involved in sharing his bed with a female.

The Scumbag boys seem to come to a rather unpleasant end... or do they?

Two teenage boys are hurt and Barney receives his first kiss.

The Scumbag boys have plans to make and Barney must come to terms with liking Emma

Two scenes merge at a time when the Reverend is having a sudden re-examination of everything he had ever believed in.

Two scenes not involving the Reverend Barney Pickle.

Barney wants to leave the Retreat