http://slow.writerscafe.org/frenchie_vance92 The original writings of author Jay. E. V. en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1775984113 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 Finally part two is up!=D Don't get too excited though as I don't find it as good as the first, and I wasn't even happy with the first=/. So, Feedback appreciated=D http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/frenchie_vance92/1121073/ Its eleven seconds. I put it in perspective, just as I always had. Eleven seconds. That’s all.  It was a small window of opportunity, but it was enough. My face ran red hot with the blood of a coward. Eleven seconds. I repeated it to myself again, attempting to diminish the severity of it.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/frenchie_vance92/1071755/ The story of a dying young woman and a man's love for her. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/frenchie_vance92/945600/