http://slow.writerscafe.org/okmoonflower The original writings of author Faith en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776029494 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 more subplot here with Keith remember it has changed to where she is 25 yrs younger! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/okmoonflower/1008452/ more detail of clinic and more subplot http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/okmoonflower/1008448/ more detail and split the first chapter, added some things that will be clarified later http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/okmoonflower/1008446/ Hope I don't throw a kink in the writing. Had a friend that just knows I am writing about him so am changing the story some. Hope you like the present tense. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/okmoonflower/1003384/ This is the dream sequence Cyndi has while in her coma. I will be the new chapter two when finished. Hope you like it! I could not take Jax out at this time, and she has to meet him better later. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/okmoonflower/1003368/ I had to change the way they meet and Jessie into Rose (Hard to do!) I am attempting to write in first person tense. Let me know what you think! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/okmoonflower/1003355/ Research for the cure, is Cyndi there? bit subplot tries to come out. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/okmoonflower/993296/ Cyndi wakes from a coma to find only a few that know she's even alive. The government wants to know about the coma and how it cured her cancers. Everyone is in danger http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/okmoonflower/993254/