http://slow.writerscafe.org/Carmiel The original writings of author Stephanie Weippert en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776062905 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 This is the start and wedding reception chapters from my latest project. I'm looking for honest opinions on plotline, and believability. Not grammar at this time. Thanks! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Carmiel/227465/ The man sat in his small study, tired to his bones. Books on shelves surrounded him, almost hiding his form from view.  A bright colored one was open on his lap, but he didn’t seem to be reading it, not really. Instead he was staring out the open window without seeing anything.  &n.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Carmiel/212147/ What's it like when your house is haunted? http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Carmiel/182275/ Basil and Rosemary lived in a farming village where nothing exciting ever happened. People were born, grew up, married, had children, got old then died.  They had good years for crops and bad years for crops.  They paid their taxes to the king.   Basil was 15 and Rosemary was.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Carmiel/178910/ Once upon a time there was a small farming village that nothing exciting ever happened. People were born, grew up, married, had children, got old then died.  They had good years for crops and bad years for crops.  They paid their taxes to the king.   Now in this village lived.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Carmiel/132199/