http://slow.writerscafe.org/SovietCommissar The original writings of author Johann L. Kohler en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776078084 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 No comment. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/516220/ Two of my favorite themes. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/504234/ I refuse to edit this one. Take it as you will... http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/319090/ Written by lamplight at 1 in the morning. I don't know where this came from. 16 Aug 2008 http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/304732/ It just came to me. No particular reason... I guess deep down I'm never going to be over her. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/269260/ Dedicated to the girl in the car. Interpret as you will. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/248867/ I don't have any comment for this...I really don't. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/246788/ I'm pretty certain she broke me. 03:15 25 Mar 2008 http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/239059/ This isn't even particularly related to my "experience"...the last verse was actually all I started with, and I liked the concept. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/227810/ This is...a lot of it. 23 September 2007 http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/222465/ This needs no explanation, except that sometimes I wonder who I was in a past life... Dedicated to the airmen of World War II. 21 Feb 2008 http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/219751/ A little older than most of the poems in this vein. 25 Sep 2006. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/219692/ I'm not looking for spectacularly good reviews. I wrote this for me, because I'm randomly having one of those days. It was kind of a good concept, at least before I wrote it. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216547/ Another song I've been working on. Yes, it's a bit emo, even for me, but...yeah. 8 Oct 2007 http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216544/ It's really sad that this poem is so much happier than how I feel as of Feb 2008. 18 Aug 2007 http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216540/ Clearly, I don't write about this enough. 7 Sep 2007 http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216533/ I went back to, as [she] said, it's of the "rambling poetry which wasn't really that so much as a string of statements lacking punctuation or sentence structure" category. 7 Sep 2007 http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216530/ No comment. 9 Nov 2007 http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216524/ This is probably one of the few poems I'm happy with, in an odd sense of "happy". I guess I don't get metaphorical this often. 18 Nov 2007 http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216521/ I suppose this could be called my first major "beat poetry" piece, in a way. It's a lot less structured than the rest of my "spoken word" submissions however you look at it. I was feeling pretty crappy. 20 Oct 2007 http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216516/ Inspired by...well, it's not hard to guess. 2 Feb 2008 http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216512/ This is going to be the last chapter for a while with this much insanity in it...I feel kind of sorry for putting Marie through so much in so little time. (Two days all told, if you hadn't noticed.) http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216363/ "Here Comes the Sun", referring to stained glass windows. P.S. Poor Ms Wagner needs a break from terrible things happening to her. She really does. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216357/ "Ashes to Ashes." A little explanation for prior insanity. Well, somewhat. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216352/ It gets a bit hardcore here. You've been warned. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216345/ It was actually 22 minutes, counting the time they'd spent sitting at a traffic accident towards the middle of the city.  Marie hadn't seen any of the people involved, just a swarm of police, some firefighters and what used to be a car.  The latter was bent lengthwise around a ut.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216343/ The title is a play on words; the German word for "rain" is "Regen"; Regensburg is the city in question. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216335/ Make sure you read them in order, or I'll make Marie strangle you. If you don't know who she is after reading this, you really are a lost cause... http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216327/ If you're reading these in order, you already know what the comment is. If not? Read the first one first! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216322/ I am not going to make a lengthy comment on every single one of these. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216313/ I can't say I have a description for this; it's a project I started two years back, and if you've been watching me long enough, you may have seen some of the previous attempts. This time, I refuse to delete what I have and start over. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216284/ http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216281/ A sequel to KCN. I'm sure you can guess what this is about. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216262/ I'm not sure what to blame this on, besides the obvious subject. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216261/ An on-the-fly, mostly unedited composition about a nuclear weapon test, of which the United States carried out 327 of between 1945 and 1962. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216250/ Written as a doodle on some forum or another, and it turned into...well, this. A rare spot of humor in my writing... http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/SovietCommissar/216247/