http://slow.writerscafe.org/Evil_Angel The original writings of author Evil_Angel en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776095653 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 Chapter 1Happy Birthday  Theyoung woman looked straight ahead and wiped blood from her trembling lips. Thefiery glow of her burning car illuminated the night as she stumbled away. Inher hand she clutched a tiny piece of paper.Shesquinted to read it. “718 Ash St.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/2013876/ http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/2013871/ Ch. 17. Like, Care, Love  Kent woke up in his condo feeling nothing but guilt about being so… however he was with Erica last night. “What was that?” Kent asked himself out loud.  The girl is getting married, he debated with himself silently.&.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/543338/ Hi guys i know its been a while, I edited this chapter and would love some constructive feedback, I REALLY want to try and publish this so anything you can give me would be great thanks! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/536623/ Sort of emo at the moment, tell me what ya think? http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/444437/ Erica spends the night alone at Kent's house and cant help but rummage through old photos, she finds out more about him and also comes up with a plan for the Great Gatsby party later that night. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/422423/ Kind of long but a lot happens. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/420281/ "Hey babe, I'm home," Marcus declared loudly.Erica jumped at the sound of his voice and went to the nearest mirror to get herself together.  After going directly to work following the whole Kent incident, the first thing she did when she got back to Marc's place was plop on the livi.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/416307/ Poor Kent who's been stabbed is about to have another form of pain, just not so physical. This just shows why he is the way he is to women. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/384116/ Marc shows up at Kent's out of nowhere, it seems a little weird, you'll see why :P http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/353776/ Here you see the softer side of Sears...or Kent whatever lol :P http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/351059/ Kent is still in the hosp, Erica stays by his side loyally. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/349728/ Romance and drama :P http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/349717/ Kent is still really sick but not in the way Erica expects. It turns into an emergency... http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/346875/ This poem got so depressing...i apologize. I love xmas but its definitely hard if you dont have anyone to share it with! I do so i dont know why the hell I'm writing this haha...enjoy. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/346853/ Erica finally sees inside Kents house, still she doesnt get to see everything as he's sick and she forgets about the mansion. Its a metaphor for him not letting her in all the way, and for her to begin not caring about the material stuff in the house, but http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/346255/ Kent and Erica get to know eachother a little more, he gets to know more of her secret and wonders if theres even more to discover. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/346249/ i NEVER write poetry hehe but i was inspired by the pic :) http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/343635/ Erica sees Kents house (well the outside) and is amazed. Shes isnt allowed inside yet lol, i kind of write that as a metaphor to kents feeelings. Anyway enjoy! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/342312/ This is Kents old best friend. Here is where we discover a little of who Erica is, or who shes trying to be at least, but Kent knows her better. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/342307/ Shorter and more romantic yay! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/340660/ Pardon my sarcasm with the chapter title. This is after Hallie has been rejected from the magazine and after shes cheated on David with christian at the lighthouse yet again. This time something is up with David dealing with it, and so he takes her to Ab http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/340658/ Edited version of the last one with Xtian at the lighthouse. It includes Hallie's magazine photoshoot and stupid LA photographers. I'm trying out for playboy in a week so i think I'm like writing on my fears of what will happen LOL. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338802/ exactly the same as before http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338799/ Again a lil different, but all in all the same plot as before. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338796/ Pretty much the same, sorta important dialogue between Julia and Hallie at the end but thats the only change really. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338795/ There will be a chapter inbetween this and the one before about Christian...its kinda hard to figure out how to write it at the moment but it should be pretty similar to before, so dont worry about it. again same stuff lol save your eyes :P http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338794/ Same old same old http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338793/ Pretty much the same LOL i dont expect you to read this all again but yea i just needed to add it. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338792/ If you haven't wanted to kill me by now LOL you can read this too, its pretty similar but the end is kinda important to read. :) http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338790/ Again super super vital to read to get everything. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338789/ LOL i cant get over my stupid chapter title. Anyway this is super super super important to read...its changed a lot it doesnt seem like it but yea you gotta read it if you want to get it and stuff. sorry again if you read it before!!! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338788/ Not much different either but sorta important to read to get the whole story. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338787/ Kind of important to read, just to catch up with the little changes in the book. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338786/ Pretty much the same as the other chapter, a lil more edited, a few little changes here and there. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338782/ Pretty much the same as the other chapter (just her cooking that cake and getting discovered for Hot Girls). You can read it as a reminder tho if you'd like! :P http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338778/ Awakening is a new chapter i added in between and so is Moving In. I thought to put the two chapters in one thing cause they pretty much go together. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338776/ OK so you've all read this chapter before, but its gone through some pretty important changes that are kind of vital to read, especially towards the end with Derek's death. Anyone thats been keeping up with the book might want to read it, I thank you lol http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338773/ Improved versions of these chapters with a few lil changes, not too much different though. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338695/ Hey you guys thanks so much for reading sunset fire 1 and 2. This will just be the chapters I've revised and also a continuation, just so theres less confusion. I've taken A LOT of chapters out so this is the revised version. Thanks again for putting up http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/338691/ REALLY awful first draft, I didnt edit much...but yea i havent posted in a while and i was inspired blah blah. I've changed a lot in the story...its pretty similar but since I've figured out an ending i had to go back and chagne a few things, so I apolog http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/337744/ Edited http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/336482/ An old friend of Kents contacts Xtian to tell him some unexpected news http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/330378/ I may continue this as a book i may not lol...was just an idea i had last night. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/329634/ TOTALLY will be changing the title...i just wanted to write the 1st chapter for now. Its about a super rich...cute guy whos father has just died...he meets this waitress who is actually his best friends fiance...things go from there. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/329632/         Hallie bid farewell to Bianca, her new workout partner, and wiped away the beads of sweat that had formed on her forehead, Hallie left the exclusive Hollywood gym, and tiredly flopped onto her cool leather car seat. The whole cast of the show had been.. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/327300/ I love my dumb chapter titles hah. Day b4 Valentines Day, just a chapter with Xtian and his friends making fun of him for all the marks on his face Krystal gave him. He has a little run in with you know who, well the 50 ft. version of her anyway. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/323511/ With her new fame Hallie is becoming a little bit of a diva more and more, thus it is making her other relationships suffer. Lil bit of a cat fight between Abby and Hal. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/320909/ Ok, so theres supposed to be a chapter before this but its on my laptop which doesnt have internet. The other ch. is just hallie having lunch with her mom and breaking the news about Hot Girls to her friends and family after she filmed the first episode, http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/317923/ Don't know if i like it or not but i do think its necessary for the book, give me your honest opinion about it. Oh just a warning to its a little on the "Mature" side...whatever that means. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/Evil_Angel/316190/