http://slow.writerscafe.org/swimming4ever The original writings of author Violette en-us Copyright 2026 WritersCafe.org 1776342705 WritersCafe.org RSS Generator 15 I will confess, I doubt I've ever written any action scene quite like this one before. Please tell me exactly what you think. If there's anywhere I can improve, let me know! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/swimming4ever/1070593/ Okay, so this chapter is going to sound crazy. I had to try to explain it and it sounds like it was written by a mad man/woman. Sorry! I promise it makes sense later . . . Also, sorry it's so long. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/swimming4ever/1070540/ The first chapter of Trapped--hope you guys like it! http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/swimming4ever/1058895/ Trapped. That's what Zila is--trapped between the real world, which she's convinced isn't real, and the Other Side, a place she is linked to but also a place where she never wants to be. http://slow.writerscafe.org/writing/swimming4ever/1058882/